1026/11 — What Terrifies You?

Last night, I was sound asleep in the middle of a dream when I heard a strangled scream from the next room. Needless to say, this jerked me out of sleep immediately, and I ran to see what was the matter. Newell was reading this and it startled him badly. (Warning: Seriously do not follow that link and read the comic if you have a weak heart or are easily frightened. If, on the other hand, you enjoy a good scare, be my guest.) He went back to the beginning and showed it to me, and I think I squeaked loudly myself at a point you will probably recognize when you reach it.

This got me thinking about what scares people. It is that time of year, after all — Halloween being just around the corner. (By the way, this is a perfect time to plug Zombified! again, with my Short Short “Interview with a Zombie”)

I’ve talked before about The Door at The Top of the Stairs. It’s the anticipation that makes the horror work in this instance. In the case of the comic I linked above, it is the unexpected that makes the reader react. Both are valid ways to create suspense and fear in your reader. What other ways have you explored? Feel free to comment — I’d love to hear from you.

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10/25/11 — RieView — Rick Riordan

Yes, I know. Rick Riordan isn’t a book. How can I review him? Well, the answer, plain and simple, is that I can’t choose just one book, so I thought I would compare and contrast his Young Adult series Percy Jackson & The Olympians Boxed Set The Complete Series 1-5 and his wonderful Adult Tres Navarre books, starting with Big Red Tequila.

For about a month now, I have been reading nothing but Rick Riordan. It started because we were reading the gentleman for the October meeting of the Georgetown Mystery Readers. I originally decided to read one of the YAs because I knew most of the group would be focusing on the Adult mysteries, but part of the reason we had chosen him as an author was his versatility.

I picked up The Lightning Thief (Percy Jackson and the Olympians, Book 1) because I like to start at the beginning of a series, and by the time I was four or five chapters in, I had the rest of the series downloaded into my Kindle. These are a great introduction to Mythology in my opinion. Mr. Riordan flirts with us, teasing with bits of myth that sound hauntingly familiar, and yet show us a fresh perspective on old friends. And, honestly, despite a lifelong love of mythology and folklore, some of the creatures he mentioned made me make a mental note to look them up later because I was unfamiliar with them. The ability to arouse a desire to research in a reader is a rare gift. His premise of the Greek Gods moving shop to America as the seat of Western Civilization drifted across the Atlantic was intriguing and innovative. In short, I loved the series and bought all his remaining juveniles as a result. They are waiting in my Kindle, but I took a break to make sure I had read at least one of the adult mysteries before the meeting.

And so I met Tres Navarre. My first intro to Tres was Mission Road (Tres Navarre). This isn’t the first in the series…it is actually number 6 of 7…but one of the beauties of the writing is that you can read them out of order, and when you read the next it fills in gaps. Perhaps because it was the first I read, this one is my favorite. The weaving of flashback and present action; the doling out of information that only later takes on full significance; the character sketches that can bring a person to life in a paragraph or two — all of these skills are what makes Rick Riordan such a fabulous writer.

While I can surely see why his Young Adult novels continue to dominate the charts, I have to admit that I love Tres Navarre even more. So much so that I had to go into an actual bookstore to find the first four volumes that weren’t available for Kindle! 😉

I am currently reading Rebel Island (Tres Navarre), and dreading the end of it because it is the last of the Tres Navarre series. Last time my mother met Mr. Riordan at a Mystery Writer’s event, she scolded him soundly because he had abandoned Tres. I hope it isn’t for long. For now, I’ll have to settle for more mythology. Luckily I have the Roman and Egyptian series to go.

Tres Navarre books in order:

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10/22/11 — Yes, It's Been Awhile…

…every time I tell myself I am going to get on a regular schedule, something comes up and I procrastinate. I think sometimes that should be my middle name…but it would just make it longer to type.

Today was the official release date of “Don’t Go Drinking With Hobbits”, and I did my first Skype radio show to help promote it. That was a blast. I’ve never done something like that before — usually avoid a microphone like the plague, but being there with Marc Gunn (at least in spirit) made things easy. I hope we continue to create more songs. I am incredibly pleased with how the album came out. The good folks at Middle Earth Radio were very supportive, and I thank Michael and Mark for making me feel at home. They say there may be a podcast available in a few days, and if so, I’ll post a link for those who missed it.

And it is time to start thinking of NaNoWriMo again…only a few days till kick off. Who is with me this year? I’ve been trying to decide which project to work on. I think I may start the sequel to The Luckless Prince. What do you have in mind?

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7/29/11 — So, Tonight, the Train Pulls into the Station

It is the final stop on the VBT tonight. A chat with all the tour participants in the Pump Up Your Book chatroom. It should be a lot of fun. And there will be prizes! From the info page: In order to get into the chat room, you will need to click on the link above and put in your real name. Only those with real names are eligible to win prizes. Ignore the part that says password, and hit Login. The chat room will magically appear before your eyes!

I personally am giving away a copy of the Firefly Drinking Songs CD which includes my lyrics on “Browncoats Keep Flyin'” and also a copy of my short story collection RieVisions. There will be other prizes offered as well.

In other news, I’ve been working on a short story for an anthology call, and counting the days until ArmadilloCon. I miss seeing everybody. 🙂

I got a lovely review on Amazon yesterday for The Luckless Prince. Still crossing my fingers people will like The Fairy GodFather (The Author’s Lab/Collaboration), but no reviews yet. Want to be the first? 😉

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7/28/11 — The Whole Story Behind The Luckless Prince

Today features a guest blog post and an interview as the Pump Up your Book VBT winds down.

First stop is at As The Pages Turn, and tells all the details of how this book came to be written. Including the colossal rookie mistake that could have been the best thing that ever happened to me.

Second stop is an author interview at Paperback Writer. Drop by and say hi!

And don’t forget tomorrow’s end of tour chat here for prizes, hilarity and more. Should be kicking off at 8PM, 7 Central. I’ll update if I find out differently.

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7/27/11 — New Review at Between the Pages today

There is a new review up today at Between the Pages book blog. Stop by and check it out. 🙂

Last night’s chat was a load of fun. If you didn’t get a chance to drop by and say hi, you’ll have another chance on Friday night as the VBT comes to a close. Just go to this link to join us. Ignore the password request and just hit enter. (Of course, there is no one in the chat room unless a chat is scheduled.) We should be getting started about 8PM, 7 Central just like last night.

In other news, I’ve actually entered several contests and submitted to a couple of anthologies with new stories lately. And I dreamed a title and premise just before I woke up. The semi-slump may be over! Hooray!

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7/26/11 — The Luckless Prince Reviewed at Today's Stop

Lovely review from Family Literacy and You! today for The Luckless Prince. My favorite part? “It’s outstanding and you won’t want to put it down once you start reading it.” 🙂

Also have an interview up today on the Virginia Beach Examiner.

It’s a busy day, as tonight is the Zumaya Birthday Chat at 8PM. (7 Central)

And don’t forget to check out The Fairy GodFather (The Author’s Lab/Collaboration) over on Amazon for a fun little fantasy story !

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7/25/11 — Today's Interview Stop on the Virtual Book Tour

Today’s stop is at Book Marketing Buzz, and is another interview as we wind down the tour toward the Friday chat finale. It’s been an interesting ride. This week is jam packed with stops, including the Zumaya birthday chat on Tuesday night that is not strictly speaking part of my tour, but which I will be taking part in as a Zumaya author. Great giveaways. Drop by and say hi at either or both chats! And remember, I will try to respond to all post comments I see. 🙂

Edit: I found out that another stop at The Story Behind the Book was posted already — I didn’t expect it until Wednesday. 🙂

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7/24/11 — Sunday RieView — The Friend Request — Alex Ford — 3 Stars

The Friend Request is an interesting cautionary tale about social networking. It is currently offered for free on the Kindle page, and I am a sucker for the free books, so I downloaded it.

David Andrews is a typical nice guy, struggling with nicotine cravings and whether or not he will get the promotion he is up for at work. As our story opens, he has received a Facebook “friend request” from someone he doesn’t recognize…but it is making him nervous all the same.

As the story unfolds, we find out why the name makes him uneasy…and just how dangerous Facebook can be in the wrong hands.

The story is not bad. I enjoyed it for the most part, though there are some incidents about two-thirds of the way through that begin stretching credulity to the point where I was beginning to be pulled out of the story — hence the 3 stars. Okay, not great. I’d still recommend it for the characters, most of whom are very nicely presented. I particularly loved Julie, who seemed to be the lynch pin holding a lot of the story together. Mr. Ford is good at creating dimensional people with a minimum of description. Even Mr. Ashwar’s wife, who only appears in one scene and has no dialogue, feels like a rounded character.

I did not see a reason for one of the villain’s chief characteristics to be caustic flatulence. By the end of the book, I was ready to scream if we heard one more description of Tony’s gas attacks. Oddly, this appears to be a trend, as the book I am reading now also makes a big deal of farts. I thought that subject was only featured in bad stand-up and teen movies…

Still, if you can overlook the flaws in this story, the rest of it is quite nice. The character relationships are worth the time it takes to read it, and I do recommend giving it a try. You can’t beat the current price.

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7/22/11–The Door at the Top of the Stairs

I’ve been working on some horror lately–revising my first full length offering, Skellyman, and writing/revising a couple of short pieces to send to anthology calls. It must have dribbled into my sub-conscious, because I had a dream last night that got me thinking and led to this post.

I dreamed last night of the Beany and Cecil jack-in-the-box I had as a kid. You turned the crank, and Cecil popped out. It was even more impressive after we had worn out the little tab that held “Cecil” onto the spring, because when the box opened, the sea serpent would fly halfway across the room. I still have this in the bottom of my toy chest (yes, I have a toy chest) though worse the wear for fifty years of service…

The main thing about that jack-in-the-box–the thing that scared the hell out of us–was the anticipation. As you turned the crank, you could see the catch on top of the box wiggling back and forth, and you knew it would eventually open and Cecil would pop out. We would turn the crank with bated breath–or sometimes with a thumb on top of the box so it couldn’t open–both anticipating and dreading the moment that it burst open. Sometimes, we would just crank for awhile and quit before it had a chance to explode. We knew all that waited inside the box was a cloth puppet on a spring, but it still had the capacity to make us scream.

In my dream, the cloth was worn to near transparency; you had to stick your hand through a hole in the bottom of the box and physically make Cecil jump out like a hand puppet because the spring was gone; the lid was off the box, for goodness sake–but it still was enough to make you jump and scream when he popped out, because only the person cranking the box knew just when that event would occur.

I read a Stephen King quote many years ago–it may have been in Danse Macabre but a quick look couldn’t find what I was after. King talks about the closed door at the top of the stairs, and how much more terrifying it is to leave that door closed and have the reader wonder what is behind it than to open it and reveal the monster, no matter how horrifying it is. Once the door it open, the matter is settled. It may still be something that will kill the character and freak the reader out–but it is now seen, and can therefore be dealt with. As long as that door remains closed, it could be anything, and there is no way for either character or reader to prepare for it.

The anticipation is key. That is what builds the unease into fear into terror…and (hopefully just in the character’s case) perhaps to madness. I’m working on this build. It’s not easy to accomplish. Who do you think has mastered it? I’d love some suggestions on who else to study. Leave your recommendations in front of that closed door at the top of the stair. 😉

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