Back Aboard the Tour Train!

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As you may (or may not) have noticed, I took the weekend off and did no blogging while the train wasn’t running. It was a lovely break, but I am eager to get back to it.

Today’s tour stop is on the Dear Reader, Love Author blog, and it talks about how much fun it is to write my independent ladies.

From Jo finding the job of her dreams to Augusta running the archives of the newspaper, the ladies of the Chronicles are take-charge kinds of women.

Even Vanessa is not your average housekeeper. After all, she has time to do all she does for the gang as well as a full day keeping the household running with no help. Ma would have much the same schedule.

Leonora and Emily, as ladies with a lot of leisure time on their hands, would have a bit more flexible day.

Of course, there would be variations in all these positions. Tomorrow we may look at what the men would be doing. 😉

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Gremlins in the Workplace

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Gremlins in the Workplace, our next entry in RieTales, from Mocha Memoirs Press, is a story of misconceptions, hasty conclusions, and workplace romance.

It was one of several stories I originally started while I was working on the test floor at Motorola about twenty years ago now. I worked the overnight shift running thousands of integrated circuits through a tester I don’t think they even make anymore to see if they were good or not. Sometimes I still dream about working that job…

It wasn’t particularly engaging, so my mind wandered a lot.

Looking into my machine one night, I wondered, “What if there really were Gremlins inside the machinery?” and this story is the result.

In this case, the Gremlins are partners with the operators, making things go smoothly. Until one night when Jhandi–one of the little creatures–goes off the deep end. Even the Gremlin expert at the plant is afraid to talk to him about it. It takes them some time to sort it all out…and when they do, they realize why there is really no room for Gremlins in the workplace.

 

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No Stop Today…

…so I thought I would share some of the pictures from last summer’s trip to Dublin. In Book Five of the Chronicles, Jo and Alistair travel to Ireland to settle her grandfather’s affairs.

They start the trip in Dublin. Now, the Dublin of today is not that of 1875, but there are so many buildings that are still in use today they might have seen then. (I did not date all the buildings, but these looked like they are the correct timeframe to me…) I think I took over a thousand photos in two weeks, between Dublin and London, and could have taken ten times that many… Having visual references adds a chance of verisimilitude to a story. 😉

 

 

After Dublin, they go down the coast to Cork. We didn’t have a chance to do that on this trip, but I hope to rectify that someday. 🙂

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Today’s Story is an Homage to Mark Twain

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I wrote “The Duke, The Dauphin, and the Dirigible” originally for an anthology that was doing Steampunk riffs off of literary masterpieces. I didn’t get into the book, but this story was too good to just throw in the trunk–at least in my opinion. So, when Mocha Memoirs decided to release a new collection of my stories, I included it in the mix.

I have loved Mark Twain‘s Adventures of Huckleberry Finn from a very young age. I always thought he was a much more compelling character than Tom Sawyer. When I was doing my student teaching, creating lesson plans for this book was a dream come true.

So, when I saw the submission call, I immediately thought of a story continuing the adventures of Huck when he returns to Hannibal after the trip down the river.

When brainstorming how to do that, the characters of the Duke of Bridgewater and the King of France came to mind. These disreputable conmen cause a lot of trouble for Huck on the river trip, and in my story, they do the same.

One of my favorite things about the book is the colloquial tone of the speech. Recreating this was really fun.

With the help of Becky Thatcher and her father, the Judge, Huck manages to save the day–and get the girl.

I started reading it again last night, and I absolutely love this story. I hope you do too.

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By E. W. Kemble (1861–1933) – (Transferred from en.wikipedia to Commons., Public Domain, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=1854602)

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Today’s Stop Is an Interview with Interesting Questions

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Today’s Book Tour stop is an interview over at Confessions of an Eccentric Bookaholic.

I had a good time with it. Reading back through it, I really liked it. I hope you will too.

One of the cool things I found about the website is that the interview pops out in another window. This is a feature of Blogspot I’d never seen before. I don’t know if it is a new feature or if I just hadn’t discovered it yet, but I rather liked it. I don’t use the site often, because most of the blogs I am associated with there are either dormant or have multiple owners, and it feels weird even looking at them.

So I have been concentrating on my WordPress blogs lately. There have been changes recently to the site, and I am still working on figuring them all out.

At the moment, I’m still using the old editor because I finally learned to use that, and I really don’t like block editors. I’ve worked with them on MailChimp for newsletters, and I think it’s okay there, but that’s because it’s all I’ve ever used there, so there isn’t any change involved. And newsletters seem like a whole other ballgame.

Sometimes we get set in our ways. Jo sometimes has this problem. How about you?

I’ve never been very good about blogging consistently. For one thing, it takes some time and my time management is lousy. But lately, I have really been enjoying the blogging, even if I am not getting any other writing done…and I have a lot to do. So, this begs the question. Is it better to blog or not to blog? I am not sure how long I can do both blogs daily…so I need to decide if I keep to the daily routine or learn to schedule posts, or what. Seeing the new followers and likes is helping a lot. I will probably keep doing these blogs when the tour is over. If you want me to. 🙂

 

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First Chapter at I’m Shelf-ish

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Today’s blog post is a first chapter reveal at I’m Shelf-ish. This chapter has been featured at several other stops, so I won’t revisit that here.

Instead, we will talk about first chapters in general.

Every time you start a new book, it is like stepping into a virgin frontier. The first chapter will set the stage for the rest of it.

Your first chapter is where the reader is first introduced to your characters. You want it to be strong and interesting. In The Marvelous Mechanical Man, this is where people first meet Jo. They see her independence, swift thinking, and a taste of her temper. They meet Alistair, and he’s a bit confused by the whole situation. This shows the direction their relationship will take until they get to know one another a bit better. They see her way of dealing with Mr. Greenstreet–and know she’s quick to make judgments.

If I had it to do over…I might have skipped the Dime Novel excerpt at the beginning. It seems like it just confuses a lot of readers. I’ve had several people tell me they just skip that part anyway. And, when I see the KENP reports where people just read a few pages and quit, I fear this is one reason why.

It really meant something to me as an author, but when you write a book, you are writing for the readers. It only took me four books to learn this lesson and ditch the gimmick.

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Drink My Soul…Please

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Did you ever have a dream spark a story? That’s what happened with my Apocalyptic science fiction story “Drink My Soul…Please.” I had a dream one night and the next morning three clear images stayed with me. One was a girl bending over an outdoor oven baking a cake and looking up to wave at a man in a toga on a hill with a cart and horse. The second was of a man in green fatigues stooping to come out of a hut with a curtain of nuts and bolts as a doorway. The final image was of a small, computer-like machine (back in the days of CRT monitors) sitting on a counter with the message “Engage?” blinking on it in green.

Those three images formed the basis of this story. The time is the future when bombs have destroyed most of the world as we know it. People have been reduced to making do–but the survivors are hardy and strong. The war is over after half a lifetime. And Daniscar Zenov is coming home at last. Elianora Vaire wonders if he will still remember her childhood declaration of love. This relationship is the heart of the story.

Science fiction is a genre I have read avidly since I was a kid. I grew up on Ray Bradbury, especially the short stories like Twice 22, and Andre Norton, with books like The Zero Stone and The Crystal Gryphon.  It’s very difficult for me to write, however–I think it is the science aspect. I enjoy science, but I wouldn’t say I am good at it. I’ve only written a handful of science fiction stories, and this one was my most ambitious. There isn’t a lot of hard science in it, but the recreation of an Apocalyptic world was difficult in itself. What would remain? What would be destroyed

It’s not an easy story to read. There are issues involved that weren’t easy to write either. Sometimes an author needs to step out of their comfort zone and tackle the hard issues. I realize that some people might be triggered by the assault involved, but it was integral to the concepts of the story.

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Tap…Tap…Tap…

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Today’s RieTales post is about “Bloody Rain” (also available as a single). It is the story of a young woman in Whitechapel in the 1880s. I bet you can guess where this is going?

I have been fascinated by the case of Jack the Ripper since I was a little girl. This story is something that I had wanted to explore for a long time. What happened to the Ripper that made him stop his murderous spree? Why five victims and then no more?

I had written another story about the Ripper, but it was a humorous take called “A Rip in Time” for Yard Dog Press’s A Bubba in Time Saves None! That was a lot of fun, but it wasn’t the story I really wanted to write about the case.

“Bloody Rain” is a serious story. Of course, it is still a “What if?” No one knows for sure what happened, but I like to think this might have been the answer.

If you would like to read more about Jack the Ripper and his victims, I recommend the following:

Complete Jack the Ripper by Donald Rumbelow

Jack the Ripper: The Simple Truth by Bruce Paley

The Five: The Untold Stories of the Women Killed by Jack the Ripper by Hallie Rubenhold

Personally, I don’t recommend Ripper: The Secret Life of Walter Sickert by Patricia Cornwell, because I felt the presentation was flawed. It is possible she is right, but I think she treats her personal theory like fact without fully making the case. It is interesting, and if you want to be a completist, read it.

Here is a long list of nonfiction books about the Ripper and here is a list of fiction (which oddly enough has a lot of the same books…) This is my personal favorite of them–Laura Joh Rowland’s The Ripper’s Shadow: A Victorian Mystery.

Explore the mystery and see what your thoughts might be. Let me know in the comments. I would love to discuss the case with other Ripperologists.

 

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Some Things Are Essential!

The saga of the refrigerator is over…and apparently successful. After finding out that the cleaning I had done to get to the garage door wasn’t what the guys delivering it was expecting or pleased with. They had to take the door handles off the old one and the actual doors off the new one to get them switched. But, here we are. It doesn’t match the rest of the appliances, but who cares? We’ve started to fill it with the essentials…Diet Dr Pepper and ice packs. A refrigerator is essential, isn’t it?

 

Today’s stop on the Virtual Book Tour is also about essentials. It’s on Book Cover Junkie and is an interview focused on the importance of a great book cover among other things. The Marvelous Mechanical Man has probably the best cover I have ever had. It was created by the brilliant Brad Fraunfelter.

A great book cover can make the difference between a book selling and not. And you have to listen to people who know what they are doing. I designed a cover for another of my books, Mutiny on the Moonbeam from Mocha Memoirs, and I really liked it.

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As an author intimately familiar with the story, I thought it completely captured the book in one image. Unfortunately…though some people looked at it and admired the atmosphere, it didn’t sell books. The publisher has re-covered it, and it will hopefully sell better. Here’s the new cover:

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It does have a more dynamic feel, but it is still to be seen if the change will bring in sales, or if it is too late.

Another reason to change covers is a new publisher. I’ve had several orphans that were picked up by someone else. Sometimes, there is a rewrite involved first:

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My first novel, The Blood that Binds became The Luckless Prince.

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The second, The Lute and the Liar has had three publishers (and is now being rewritten…) Each version has had a different cover:

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The Right Hand of Velachaz has also had two different covers for two different publishers.

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The cover is the first thing a potential reader sees. You want it to be the best you can make it. This post is a bit off the Conn-Mann topic, but covers are important for every book. (Including the Chronicles.)

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As Promised…More In-Depth Story Posts!

I had such a good time with the Dark Divinations series that I decided to give the same treatment to my own collection of stories, RieTales from Mocha Memoirs–which is an expanded version of the earlier collection RieVisions. (Yikes! That’s some mark-up, but it is out-of-print…) After this set, maybe I will keep going with more anthologies. These are fun.

The first story in the collection is entitled “Beauty within the Briars.” This may be the first of my fairy tale re-envisionings. My version of Sleeping Beauty definitely doesn’t hark back to Disney! Instead, it tells a darker story of twins separated at birth and a princess who feels she is missing something in life.

It was also an exercise in poetic language. I wanted to wax as lyrical as possible and still be writing prose.

It is based on the concept of yin and yang, which, in turn, explores dualism. I think it is my attempt at being philosophical. 🙂

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